Before I add my short story, I should give a slight introduction. I am a Children's Librarian, so I primarily read children's and young adult fiction. Therefore, that is the shape that my writing seems to take. As always any feedback is welcome.
Revenge
It wasn’t fair. Why was he being punished? Ben had taken
part too, but of course he wasn’t sent to his room. He got away with it, as
always. Thomas slammed his door as hard as he possibly could. He gave a smug
smile as something crashed to the floor outside his room. If he was lucky it
would be his mother’s favourite vase, hopefully smashed to a blue and white
heap. He threw himself down on the bed and angrily thought of all the
revengeful acts he could exact on his brother. His favourite was the custard
bed. Ben always jumped into bed in the pitch black, so he wouldn’t be able to
see what he was about to land in. Thomas chuckled at the thought of Ben covered
in slimy smelly custard.
Hours later, Thomas was bored. He still couldn’t leave his
room and there was only so much daydreaming and staring at football posters he
could do. He considered tearing up some of his posters, but the England squad
hadn’t done anything wrong, why should they suffer. He looked at himself in the
mirror and sighed at his mass of curly hair. Nothing he could do would ever
control the unruly mass on his head. He reached for some gel and then changed
his mind and grabbed a cap. The bright green cap clashed with his freckled pale
face, but he didn’t care. It’s not as if anyone would actually see him wearing
it.
Tap. Tap. Tap. An
unusual noise was coming from the window. He decided to ignore it; it was
probably his brother throwing stones at the window again. Tap. Tap. Tap. Thomas was starting to get annoyed now; he just
wanted to be left alone to sulk. The curtains were closed, that should have
been enough of a hint. Tap. Tap. Tap. In
frustration Thomas ripped the curtains open and soon wished he hadn’t. For
there was nobody there. He scanned the garden and the road outside but no one
was in sight. He shuddered and strained his eyes to see as far as he possibly
could. The road was completely empty, not even a cat wandered among the houses.
It was then that he noticed the words written in tiny print upon his window. He
stared in wonder at the tiny handwriting and tried to imagine the creature that
would be small enough to write it. His nose was almost pressed against the
glass and his breath clouded around the words as he read them.
‘Nice cap. Custard it is’.
Puzzled, Thomas read the words again. Lying on his bed might
help him to think and it was almost bedtime, so he sunk down underneath his
squishy duvet and punched his pillow into a more comfortable shape. He was just
about to close his eyes when he heard a scream from next door, from his
brother’s room.
‘Muuuuuuuuummmmm’, Ben was yelling, ‘there’s something
disgusting in my bed’.
Thomas smiled and pulled his football pitch sheets tighter
around his body. He didn’t understand what had happened, but revenge was
definitely served – and this time it was a delicious slimy bed.
Outside Thomas’s window a tiny winged shadow chuckled,
before launching itself delicately from the ledge. The Revenge Fairy was needed
elsewhere that night.
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